Improving..

This week, as the eighth week of blogging, I have decided to use my time researching about what I could do to make my blog reviews better. I convinced myself that I need to include more information about restaurants/fast food places that I will be blogging in the near future. The blogs that I have wrote so far only include the basic information about the restaurants/fast food places. Other people that write restaurant reviews say that you should include how the restaurant is, how the service was/how your server was, how the quality of the food was, how the atmosphere was, etc. A lot of information can be included other than just the basic amount. I feel like if I include more information, I will convince readers that certain restaurants/fast food places are good to go to. I have decided to try and include much more information than I do now because I want readers to be more convinced.

Disneyland, CA

As week seven of blogging, I have decided to write a review about a restaurant that is located inside Disneyland Amusement Park. If you have ever been to Disneyland, you should know that they are known for their sourdough chili bowls and their sourdough clam chowder bowls. Personally, my favorite is the sourdough chili bowl. I have never actually been a fan of clam chowder, but I know people who are and they say the clam chowder is also very good. The chili being poured into the sourdough bread bowl is delicious as well as the bread bowl. The chili is always warm and never tastes like its been sitting for days. Even though there is always a lot of people waiting in line to get them, their service is pretty fast. After I order, I usually get my bread bowl within the next 5 minutes or so. The only con about the places is that you only have the option to sit outside. I would still definitely recommend trying these bread bowls.