Improving..

This week, as the eighth week of blogging, I have decided to use my time researching about what I could do to make my blog reviews better. I convinced myself that I need to include more information about restaurants/fast food places that I will be blogging in the near future. The blogs that I have wrote so far only include the basic information about the restaurants/fast food places. Other people that write restaurant reviews say that you should include how the restaurant is, how the service was/how your server was, how the quality of the food was, how the atmosphere was, etc. A lot of information can be included other than just the basic amount. I feel like if I include more information, I will convince readers that certain restaurants/fast food places are good to go to. I have decided to try and include much more information than I do now because I want readers to be more convinced.